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January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ooh, their relationship is progressing! haha, well, they're on the cover of the paper. they're dating, and happy...what do they have to hide. good chapter!
update soon please :-)
update soon please :-)
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January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Adding poems and literature into the story is a great idea, infact it made the intimate moments between Draco and Hermione so much more beautiful and fulfilling.
Bob
Bob
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January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
at least the picture was not of them at the Garden the night before! ;) lol
I find that Opera date to be bad planning on the characters' part, and goes against Draco's thoughts in the most recent chapter - about choosing muggle venues because it was easier to hide. Hmm, Draco dear you took her on a date to the Opera. High society etc etc, that's not very secretive!
Can't wait to see how Hermione handles the news, especially since she's going to the Weasley's the morning.
Why are the twins so obsessed with public attention? I don't recall any mention of why.. though I should double check.
Anyhoos, thanks for updating!! Great new addition, can't wait for the next one!
I find that Opera date to be bad planning on the characters' part, and goes against Draco's thoughts in the most recent chapter - about choosing muggle venues because it was easier to hide. Hmm, Draco dear you took her on a date to the Opera. High society etc etc, that's not very secretive!
Can't wait to see how Hermione handles the news, especially since she's going to the Weasley's the morning.
Why are the twins so obsessed with public attention? I don't recall any mention of why.. though I should double check.
Anyhoos, thanks for updating!! Great new addition, can't wait for the next one!
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January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH!!! Brilliant chapter!!! I love your story; I have enjoyed it from the first chapter and up until now. Brilliantly written, and yes, please more!!
Liz
Liz
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January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*mouth hangs open* Shit! How the fuck could they get caught? I thought they were so careful. But on the other hand, i guess they were bound to get caught with all that public display of affection. Don't you?
I love the oral scene; and how she had so much control over her tone when she talked to him. I don't normally read that in stories, and that is definately a plus.
I wish i could have been there to see Draco's morning appearance and his facial expression when Blaise read the Sunday paper. That would have been priceless. But some faces i want to see is her friend's expression. Now that would be something i would pay to see; over and over again.
Oh yeah, i was suppose to ask you: Where do you look for these references for your stories? I mean i've never heard of most of them until now and i got to admit they do go so well with this story. Are you a Literature major or something? If not then are you a Greek major?
Anyway, until you get the other chapter up, so long
This chapter was BRILLANT
Much love
Latricia
2006
I love the oral scene; and how she had so much control over her tone when she talked to him. I don't normally read that in stories, and that is definately a plus.
I wish i could have been there to see Draco's morning appearance and his facial expression when Blaise read the Sunday paper. That would have been priceless. But some faces i want to see is her friend's expression. Now that would be something i would pay to see; over and over again.
Oh yeah, i was suppose to ask you: Where do you look for these references for your stories? I mean i've never heard of most of them until now and i got to admit they do go so well with this story. Are you a Literature major or something? If not then are you a Greek major?
Anyway, until you get the other chapter up, so long
This chapter was BRILLANT
Much love
Latricia
2006
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January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oops- 2 things I forgot.
As I haven't read the reviews, my comments are not a rebuttal or anything like that, not intended to as angry defense. I only mention it because I HATE when people will complain about reviews they got (which you did NOT do) and then the angry legions of reviewers swarm the review boards in the author's 'defense.' I just want to you to know that I'm on board with your way of thinking. It's marvelous, IMO. But I'm certainly not trying to bash anyone's concrit.
Also, you seem to be an opera fan? Are you an opera fan? Have I already asked you this? *loves opera*
As I haven't read the reviews, my comments are not a rebuttal or anything like that, not intended to as angry defense. I only mention it because I HATE when people will complain about reviews they got (which you did NOT do) and then the angry legions of reviewers swarm the review boards in the author's 'defense.' I just want to you to know that I'm on board with your way of thinking. It's marvelous, IMO. But I'm certainly not trying to bash anyone's concrit.
Also, you seem to be an opera fan? Are you an opera fan? Have I already asked you this? *loves opera*
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January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really love where you are taking this story! Its amazing!!
BRAVO
I just hate where you left this chapter! I cant wait to see the twins reaction to Hermione stealing their spotlight with Draco and everyone reaction to them being together!
Update soon!!
D
BRAVO
I just hate where you left this chapter! I cant wait to see the twins reaction to Hermione stealing their spotlight with Draco and everyone reaction to them being together!
Update soon!!
D
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January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness!
Yet another wonderful chapter. I've loved the way you've moved things slowly between them and the fact that you've got a firm ally in Luna. Your smut is just wonderful - trust Hermione to discuss literature (even if it is erotica) in the middle of something so... sexy.
Where you've ended it though... that's just EVIL! I can't wait until the next update. Please do so soon! Once again, it was a pleasure reading a new chapter.
Bek
Yet another wonderful chapter. I've loved the way you've moved things slowly between them and the fact that you've got a firm ally in Luna. Your smut is just wonderful - trust Hermione to discuss literature (even if it is erotica) in the middle of something so... sexy.
Where you've ended it though... that's just EVIL! I can't wait until the next update. Please do so soon! Once again, it was a pleasure reading a new chapter.
Bek
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January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your story and would love to be on your update list. I hope your new update comes in soon because I can't wait to see what happens
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January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It was a smaller chapter but perfect none the less. Oh I adored the way you wrote Anais Nin into the chapter...brilliant! And I love how Draco's seeing a potential alliance with Luna. Just a perfect chapter to further plot and smut and you did it wonderfully. I feel bad for Draco...he's going to be hunted down like a mangy dog. And poor Hermione...she has to deal with the Weasley's and *gulp* perhaps even Bill looking at her and Harry...is not going to take this well. Wow! I hope you update soon and thanks for putting me on the update list *beams*.