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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great job, once more, and do keep me on the update list! Good luck in the voting!
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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
chapter 4
hermione not coming to brunch after her break up with bill seems so realistic and true, even though her best friends are there just makes you feel for her. loved how bill was the one that stopped the barade of questions about her "new guy" and draco's fantasy in the bookstore to be so amusing. can't wait to see how the opera goes.
hermione not coming to brunch after her break up with bill seems so realistic and true, even though her best friends are there just makes you feel for her. loved how bill was the one that stopped the barade of questions about her "new guy" and draco's fantasy in the bookstore to be so amusing. can't wait to see how the opera goes.
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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your knowldgement of books amazes....it makes me think you are an English professor...or something..HAHAHA...GOod Job....
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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
WHY DID IT STOP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! KEEP GOING, KEEP GOING, KEEP GOING!!!!!!!!!!11111
THINK ENERGIZER BUNNY THOUGHTS!!! U MUST UPDATE AS FAST AS HUMANLY POSSIBLE!!
seriously, i come home everyday and check if your story has updated (i have u under my 'favorites')
i love it. period,
WHY DID IT STOP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! KEEP GOING, KEEP GOING, KEEP GOING!!!!!!!!!!11111
THINK ENERGIZER BUNNY THOUGHTS!!! U MUST UPDATE AS FAST AS HUMANLY POSSIBLE!!
seriously, i come home everyday and check if your story has updated (i have u under my 'favorites')
i love it. period,
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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
chapter 5
holy fucken god, that was totally good. can't believe that draco held so much self control and how hermione could not follow him back hoem and skip that party. cna't wait to see how she's gonna reciporcate to draco's actions.
holy fucken god, that was totally good. can't believe that draco held so much self control and how hermione could not follow him back hoem and skip that party. cna't wait to see how she's gonna reciporcate to draco's actions.
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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
chapter 6
haha well, that just ended my questions with how hermione will "repay" draco for his actions. HAHA i love blaise in this story and can't wait to see what the weseleys and harry are gonna do to draco, and hopefully there will be drama in the next chapter.... hmmm... hopefully something that will involve bill.
UPDATE SOON!
haha well, that just ended my questions with how hermione will "repay" draco for his actions. HAHA i love blaise in this story and can't wait to see what the weseleys and harry are gonna do to draco, and hopefully there will be drama in the next chapter.... hmmm... hopefully something that will involve bill.
UPDATE SOON!
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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOHHH!!! I am loving you!!!!! I enjoyed this so much I went out and rented "Out of AFrica" from my library. And now...I am begging my friends to buy it for me for my birthday. I thank you for putting your little quotes in, and I can't wait to finish dinesen so I can start another, and I especially love the poem 'Body of a Woman' and the way he quotes it to Hermione- that was beautiful. So good lucka nd Ican't wait to see how the WEasley's react at breakfast, u oh?!, and if you ahve any more fluffy stuff coming my way becasue of this exposure.
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January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ara! You updated and it's my birthday! *considers this update to be a present JUST FOR ME!* ;D
But seriously, I only have a few minutes so I can't leave my typical thesis length analysis, but WOW! Okay, first of all, your 'naughty' scenes are amazing. *melts* Seriously, unbelievably hot. I was happy for Draco. ;) He's been a good boy, deserved a little treat.
Which brings me to my next point. When he came out and Blaise was there with the paper, I was positive that the article was going to be an expose that detailed their, er, PDA of the night before. I was so nervous! I was actually relieved when it turned out to just be outing their relationship. *breathes deeply* I can't wait for the explosions to follow! How will everyone react? Shock? Anger? Maniacal vengeance? We shall see, and I can't wait!
Also, you expressed a worry at one point (it may have been in an email) a worry that maybe this needs more conflict. My answer is, no, I don't think so. You're doing a marvelous job with the story. It's not about some external conflict. The way you've written it, the driving force is the two of them coming together and building this entirely new relationship and dealing with the scars of the past, etc. It's my pet peeve when people throw in tons of secondary 'problems' just to create more conflict and drama. If it's not central to the plot, why is it there? I absolutely adore your story. Beautiful writing, very realistic (yet romanticized) situations and interactions- it's just gorgeous. And all (or at least the vast majority- I haven't read every review) of your hundreds of reviewers agree with me.
Anyhow, I'm biased, I suppose, but there it is. I think you're doing a stupendous job with the story. Your updates always make my day! I've been talking you up on IM and LJ too, and everyone who's come to read has good things to say! *subliminal messaging- you must open a livejournal, must open livejournal*
It's so fun, and I adore your writing and YOU! :D But either way, wonderful chapter!
But seriously, I only have a few minutes so I can't leave my typical thesis length analysis, but WOW! Okay, first of all, your 'naughty' scenes are amazing. *melts* Seriously, unbelievably hot. I was happy for Draco. ;) He's been a good boy, deserved a little treat.
Which brings me to my next point. When he came out and Blaise was there with the paper, I was positive that the article was going to be an expose that detailed their, er, PDA of the night before. I was so nervous! I was actually relieved when it turned out to just be outing their relationship. *breathes deeply* I can't wait for the explosions to follow! How will everyone react? Shock? Anger? Maniacal vengeance? We shall see, and I can't wait!
Also, you expressed a worry at one point (it may have been in an email) a worry that maybe this needs more conflict. My answer is, no, I don't think so. You're doing a marvelous job with the story. It's not about some external conflict. The way you've written it, the driving force is the two of them coming together and building this entirely new relationship and dealing with the scars of the past, etc. It's my pet peeve when people throw in tons of secondary 'problems' just to create more conflict and drama. If it's not central to the plot, why is it there? I absolutely adore your story. Beautiful writing, very realistic (yet romanticized) situations and interactions- it's just gorgeous. And all (or at least the vast majority- I haven't read every review) of your hundreds of reviewers agree with me.
Anyhow, I'm biased, I suppose, but there it is. I think you're doing a stupendous job with the story. Your updates always make my day! I've been talking you up on IM and LJ too, and everyone who's come to read has good things to say! *subliminal messaging- you must open a livejournal, must open livejournal*
It's so fun, and I adore your writing and YOU! :D But either way, wonderful chapter!
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January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! i love the story!!!! u must update soon!!! i am dying here. wuts gonna happen?!
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January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! i love the story!!!! u must update soon!!! i am dying here. wuts gonna happen?!