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for Tin Angel

by AraLuna

person Flavvi
schedule August 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I know it's been years since you wrote the story, but I had the urge to review. I start saying that I like it and that it is an extremely pleasurable read. But I came across your reference to Wuthering Heights and seriously,... It was really out of place. There's no reason for her to call him Heathcliff. It seems that Draco did something Heathcliff would have done or even actually did. But knowing Heathcliff he would surely live in the big, lonely, dark house... So it doesn't really make sense.
Plus his name is not Heathcliff Earnshaw. Just Heathcliff. It is stated more than once during the novel.
Apart from that I really liked your story so far! Good job!
person Anon
schedule July 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Loving it and wishing for more. All the refences make me smile.
person Meg
schedule November 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Pleeeeeeeease update!!!!!! I love it!!!
person cgbl
schedule August 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I have just come across this story and am about to check on the date of the latest update, hoping that it wasn't years ago! I have loved how well written and flowing the story is with lots of witty banter between the characters. I sincerely hope that you are still writing this and plan to update soon!
person nikif
schedule July 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
thanks to share this .... loviliest story:) it was difficult to stop reading, my eyes nearly glue on the words...
thanks to share your imagination with us and thanks to finish when you had time:)

xxx

French reader
person tsita
schedule March 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful! Just beautiful! You had me looking up so many words that I didn't know and a books and authors!
I really enjoyed reading your fanfic! Thanks so much for sharing!
Good luck on your next chapter! Can't wait for more!
person Victoria
schedule August 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is absolutely one of the finest Draco-Hermione love stories in all of fanfictiondom. I have followed it on another site and was hopeful that I'd find more chapters here. You write exceptionally good dialogue, blisteringly hot love scenes, and have created an all-around great story. I hope you decide to finish it someday and make all your readers happy.
person bec
schedule July 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am hoping beyond hope (especially since the last update was over 3 years ago) that you still check the email associated with this story. I love it. Absolutely wonderful story. The build up is perfect. The snippets of sayings from other stories are fantastically blended into the story. Hopefully you see this and continue
person Trelweny
schedule July 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love how you've integrated so much wonderful "muggle" literature into this fanfiction as well as how it has been manipulated to bring Draco and Hermione together. Both characters are very believably shifted and extrapolated from what we learn of them in canon. I'm not a fan of seeing Bill in a negative light... nor how harsh and how long the Weasleys (sans the twins of course) have been unkind to Hermione but I can deal.

...it's really too bad this will likely never be finished after all this time. It is quite lovely.

Thanks so much for writing.
person ariathel
schedule October 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you updated! This story has been a favorite of mine for a while, and I've been checking back every now and then to see if it's been updated. Can't wait for more!