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yes you can borrow the name

this is so sweet! can't wait to see what's coming for us next.

Yay...Great chapter! I like this explanation for how they first fell in love. :)

That was a great chapter. I fell terrible for them, but I'm sure they will be able to learn a lot about each other in the next two years. I"m looking forward to more.

I'm liking this story very much! I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the great work!

Hello! Yay! I liked this update. Very good, though I am sad that Sev turned down Hermione! I hope he comes around soon!! They are such a great couple, and your story is very clever. Anyhow, I haven't seen any spelling mistakes in a long while, so good job. Have you got a beta to read it before hand; they are such a help. My friend betas for me. Also, I don't mind that you did the name thing at the end. I rather like it..It has such a pretty sound. And I guess I should be...dunno...honored? Well, no matter what your motives, I thank you! I guess I don't have to tell you to keep writing? hehe!!
Emmaline

Love this already. Has the potential to be a really great story. Keep up the good work!
Toodles.

*Grins* The repeat offender is back. Great start to the story, love how you ended when Hermione fainted. *Giggles* Can't wait to find out what happens next. Update soon.

Hello! I was hoping for a sequel, but yes, I was wondering this too! It is a nice start and I think that you have a clever idea with the potion. Somehow I knew it would end up with Sevvie!! No spelling mistakes that I caught, so good job. I would like to offer you a bit of advice though, and you may choose what you do with it. Ok... Try not to move Hermione and Severus into a relationship too fast..I've read a few stories like that and most of them don't flow as well as ones that don't rush them. But hey, its your story! you do whatever! And I like that you are bringing Dumbledore and Sirius back into the story. I cried when they died, so I'll be happy to see them back! yay! You can bet I'll read chapter two! And if you don't mind, I'll take the name you gave me: Sincerely yours, Emmaline Granger

Oh dear, that didn't turn out like they expected! BTW according to JKR Hermione is already a year older than her classmates, starting Hogwarts at 11 and turning 12 on Sept. 19.