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for Surrey Troubles

by kirallie

person gundam06serenity (too lazy to log in)
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^____^ Me again.

Soo, what I like this time:

You've got the whole Duo + hair = possessive as hell thing perfect.

Oh, I can see it now. Harry's circus act; him fending off a pack of deatheaters? him sicking a python on the audience Ooo, Cool! I wanna try, I wanna try!

Nononononono! Was loving the HQ thing untill it got to Remus! HE IS NOT DYING! YOU LIE! YOU-YOU LIER-LIEE PANTS! Noooooooooo!



Ok, liking Harry's attitude towardas the wizarding world; I never did get why he remained faithful.

'Fei and I set him straight though.' ........ 0.0....... both daunting, & hawt! ^_~

Ooooooooo... Soooo...preeeety....sooooooo...gooooood....

I love the whole black-clothing this ^.^ again, something a lotta authors miss out on--you are soooo one of the greatest!

tehehehe... leash....

...

wait for it....

...

CAFFINECAFFINECAFFINECAFFINE!

tehehehehehe

'Heero gave him the famous death glare but the younger teen shrugged it off, Dementors were scarier. ' GO HARRY! Woooo!

(sorry... comming down off a sugar high... just imagine Duo + pocky + sugar + caffine + a army of mobile dolls to blow up = me comming down off of sugar...)

anyway, I gues I'll review the next chapter ... err, next ^__^

(can you tell I've have the review box open whilst I was reading? )
person gundam06serenity (too lazy to log in)
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm baaaaack.... no deleating my reviews or I'll-I'll... pout! face the almightly poutyness-power! Bwahahahahahaha excuse me....

I like Harry's reaction to the magical movie--I always wondered what he'd think ^.^

You've got the perfect balance between all of the character's, have kept them all within character, and have managed a facinating plot; I'm amazed & impressed.

love the drug & drag idea it is soooo Duo! Oh Treiiiiize.

I love how Hee-chan delt with everything; It's so him! drug 'em, then discuss your options ^__^

Oh, & just the right level of sarcasum on Wuffers

Ooo, will Quat try to be matchmaker? that is sooo him!

person gundam06serenity (too lazy to log in)
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like Wuffer's thinkin: now, let's everyone shoot Heero!!!!!!! Weeeeeee!

dump Heero in it, why dontcha Wuffers?

Oooo, 'ickle harry has a teeemper!

Finally! Duo calls Wuffer's a reiculace nickname & Wu gets annoyed! The only thing you were missin'.

tehehe,.... they broke him Ow! Ok, ok! Just ta let ya know, it's hard ta get your mind outta the gutter if it has always lived there...

die!

NOOOO! WUFFERS!!!!!!!!!!
person gundam06serenity (too lazy to log in)
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
One thing first--when all the other pilots were 15, Tro was 17, so 2 years age gap, not one, but that is neither here nor there. Good start--the pilots seem to be within character so far ( Wahoo! I love this fic! I love Duo-chan & Wufei-san... Will Treize-Kun & Zechs-ey be in it? ) Oh, & sooo glad that you're ignoring HBP (I still refuse to read it....) Also, love the already established pairings (shame no 1x2x5, but 5xHP could be... interesting ^___^)

Also, so far loving the fact that the war will still be going on (I hate it when the author just makes the pilots 'magically' end the war & skim over it completely and then give them all powers & suddenly, say Hee-chan'd be related to Harry or something.)

'Quatre gave him the look that could even make Heero cave sometimes, like when he was half dead but it still counted' I love it!

It's been waaaaaaaay too long since I read a good gundam wing fic. I think this is one of the only two HP-GDW fic's I have ever liked & enjoyed so much (& that have ever been believable)

Also, the pilots reaction was very realistic & within character. ^__^ I love how Heero delt with Harry.
person Coconut
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kick @$$ story...

Please...

Update...

Soon...

*twitches, giddy waiting for more*

I just love how your working this all together, simply forget the difference of the century they are both in... and boom... it works out pretty well.
person Serylis
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story... its been so long since I've read any Gundam Wing things that I need to get back to it! I can't wait till you update the story, and Harry and WuFei are so cute together!!! Good job!
person no use 4 a name
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey

im loving this, there definatly should be more gndam wing crossovers out there

keep at the writing and try and introduce a bit more description

wck story!

no use 4 a name
person volume
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I cn't wait to read more
person Nunquamdie22
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it please keep going
person kizuna
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
holly cow! how did you do all that writing in one day. jeepers. I so love this story. I did not think you could mix the two but you did and they are great! cant wait to see more. love Kizuna