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for A Maid in the Devil's Manor

by Ms_Figg

person Koda
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great ending! Especially that last line from Severus. I truly can't wait for the sequel! See you in your next story, Ms. Figg.
person Clare
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy moses.

In the normal run of things I detest fanfiction. But this was something else. Truly. Hearty congratulations! Even the odd typo ;) failed to detract from the excellent writing and characterisation.
person JW
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 51 - hmm, okay, I suppose you can end here..... although I hope that Lucius dies in the sequel! And maybe the poor garden elf will win an elf-to-elf bet in the sequel, too. But definitely, dead Lucius would be good! Thanks for posting - love your writing!!
person calamitysandra
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you, great story!

I am looking forward to a sequel or what ever you will write next.

Sandra
person Kashimir
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to say that I liked your story. I got "lucky" and just found it, didn't have to wait for the story to finish. ;-)
I liked the way Severus and Hermione interacted, and how things flowed in the story.
person siriusluv
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I love the idea about ending the killing curse. Hate to see the story end, I've been checking at least twice a day-when the kids are driving me nuts I take a Severus/Hermione break. Thanks for writing.
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
another great story by ms figg keep writting more storys
person Laura
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Standing ovation...applause*

That was great, MsFigg! Another magnificent story ended well.

A sequel sounds good- there are still 2 Unforgivables they can work on ending...plus, given the fact that your other Severus and Hermione are married, we can still watch these 2 progress!

Thanks-
Laura
person Donavon.
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, she might have waited awhile but she's definitely making up for it.
Severus as such stamina, you just have to regret it isn't you on the receiving
end. Loved the chapter.
person frenchgirl
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Now that was some story !!!! Awesome !!!! The plot, the writing, the updating : everything was perfect !!! I am happy to know you will do a sequel, I can't wait for it. It was really a pleasure reading your story, congratulations on a good work done !!!;)