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for A Maid in the Devil's Manor

by Ms_Figg

person Joi
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
SERIOUSLY... I follower this story from chapter 12, I think... I'm sorry I waited until now to review... You did have me a little worried when the chapters momentarily dropped back to 20 or so! This was VERY well written, you have a real talent for smut! I don't know what else to say other than I found myself wishing that *I* was Hermione. Good job!
person shelly
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my god, this story was amazing. thank you so much for writing it and completing it so quickly. this was so well writen that i'm gonig to regret returning to the other fanfictions. please write more stories. you're a wonderful writer and it would be a shame to waste such a powerful gift.
person Michelle
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My! That was exhilirating! And yes, by all means, a sequel, please! This was just the pick-me-up I needed after a real downer I read last night. I love happy endings, and I love lots and lots of lemons. Whoa. Cheers!
person caeuleusdea
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love your story it just keeps geting better update soon
person Hope
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Toes curling jsut reading this, I live a snarky, possesive Severus more than anything
person SyXX
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think it was a great way to end the story, tho I was so hopeing he'd ask her to marry him..Damn...LOL...A sequel you say? I'd like to see a proposal, a weeding, maybe a kid...I think Sev would make a good father...LOL...Great work!
person Donavon.
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No please listen to another author, it is not finished, she could get pregnant, between them they
could sort out the Ministry. They could have loads of explosive SEX, BECAUSE YOU WRITE IT SO WELL
HOW AM I SUPPOSE TO SURFY KNOWING THERE SHOULD BE MORE TO COME.

Apart from that rant. The story was brilliant, I just hope you will reconcider, hopefully you will change your mind.

Best wishes, Eileen/Donavon
person ladyofthemasque
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
--WAAAAAAAAAAAHH!! It ENDED!!!! *sobs disconsolately for a while...then realizes Ms_Figg, loverly author that she is, will surely write MORE, PLEASE, and perks up* ...So...when are you gonna post this on RestrictedSection.org?? ~Lotm
person angel
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow that was a great story .. and i cant wait for a sequel and will lucius get back at them ... i cant wait ... i just love your stories .. in till next time later for now

angel
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWSOME STORY! I'M SO SORRY IT HAD TO END! PLEASE DO A SEQUAL! This story kicked ass! It rocked! I love it! Can't wait for the sequal!

Your biggest fan,
Tiffany