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November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Great writing. Rita was even worse than I imagined. Oh no! Lucius was there too?! This is going to get bad. Update soon.
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November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just read all 6 chapters and I am so loving this story!! LMAO!! I can't wait to see what happens next!! You rock!! Keep up the good work and please, please update soon!!
Alauralen
Alauralen
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November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Snape, Snape, Snape *shakes head*
What did he get himself into this time.
Yes, it would have been difficult to persuade Hermione to work exclusivly for him, but this way?
I can see trouble brew at the horizon.
But in the end it will work out! It will work out, will it not? You are not going to break with old habits. You know what a sucker for a happy end I am.
Until then I will very much enjoy the ride you provide for us this time. You are the best.
Sandra
What did he get himself into this time.
Yes, it would have been difficult to persuade Hermione to work exclusivly for him, but this way?
I can see trouble brew at the horizon.
But in the end it will work out! It will work out, will it not? You are not going to break with old habits. You know what a sucker for a happy end I am.
Until then I will very much enjoy the ride you provide for us this time. You are the best.
Sandra
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November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok, now I just want the rest of the story, NOW. :)
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November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great update! I can't wait to see what Rita write! Severus sure is a coniving little bastard, but then he wouldn't be Snape if he wasn't. I can't wait for you to update again! Please update again and soon!
Tiffany
Tiffany
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! Love how this one is flowing so far and the little clues of what may be to come. I wonder what fuels Hermione's ability to keep that killing curse so strong? It'll be fun to read. Well done, as usual!
L
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it man shes not going to be happy after he gets her fired update soon
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome as always....keep it up.
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So far so great! I like the way this is seeming to be heading toward Plot with Porn! Honestly, even with out the porn, I am happy so far. This story would be able to stand on it's own even without the lemons. (Not that I wouldn't MIND some lemons, mind you!)
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like that hermione is a more shrewed and less knaive here. Good she can hold her booze, otherwise she try to seduce him :). I really like Snape's straegizing and how he is making some mistakes based on assumptions. Let's hope he can trap Hermione a lttile better for all our sakes ;>. I suppose it will be a few chapters before her lonliness gets the better of her and Snape starts to realize ther eis more to Miss Granger than a brilliant mind and potential payoff. I am wondering how Snape is going to manage getting her fired, i don't think she would forgive him something like that.