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for A Maid in the Devil's Manor

by Ms_Figg

person Alauralen
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WWEEE thank you for updating so soon!! I can't believe Severus!! Yes it does look as though he will get his own way!! Rita should be elated!! Until Hermione kicks her ass anyway! LOL!! Another great chapter!! Keep up the good work!!

Alauralen
person JW
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 7 - very nice way to work in the "roses" part! Poor little guy, if he'd known how to do it I'm sure his mother would've given him her ugly and wilted roses to dry for potions ingredients. Raucous seems to be warming up to Hermione a bit - snerk! I do hope Severus disguised his handwriting and put a self-destruct charm on the letter to Skeeter; if not, Severus could end up as a stinkbug! The only good thing about the stinkbug Auror is that Ron and Harry stopped setting her up on those blind dates; the boys are still clueless about women. So glad to see happy house-elves!
person becca
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love the bird.
person angel
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmm is it draco or lucius ... and i hope thing dont get to bad for mione ...and what sill harry and ron say ...please please update soon and later for now

angel
person Hypatia
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 8-

Ah...the persuasive, populist power of the paparrazzi!!!!

This is getting REALLY good!!
person becca
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Uh-oh. When Hermione finds out about Severus' plan...ain't gonna be pretty. So glad to see Eli again. Good job.
person droxy
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cant sleep so I popped in an lo and behold! An update, goody for me. So it's not the Devil's manor anymore, but it stillneeds a maid. I know what is coming but it is so much fun getting there. Loved the fact Snape wants theplace cleaned and erased. I hope the ancient one added something else too.
person Vampire_Exotica
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Those cold grey eyes wouldn't belong to the delectable Lucius Malfoy would they? lol Yeah you probably think I'm sick for calling him that....I just can't help it after seeing Jasson Issac's in that blond wig *drools* But give me Snape anyday. lol I love this! Love your characterization of Snape and Hermione, I really can't wait for the next chapter! How will Hermione act with those House elves? What was with that dream thing? Will Snape regret his invovling Rita? What will Lucius do? Ooooo so many Questions! Can't wait to find out! *bounces around* More wine I think....care to send me one of those never ending carafes? :)


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schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great last two chapters! I'm so getting in to this story! I can't wait for the next update! Please update again and soon! Pretty please with a cherry on top!

Tiffany
person Jennifer Carter
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Personally, I would beat the hell out of Severus if I was Hermione. Then I'd kiss it and make it better. :) Great job!