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for A Maid in the Devil's Manor

by Ms_Figg

person angel
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i just hope mione ever finds out or she will kill you .... please please more ..i love it ....later for now

angel
person Maela
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love it! Severus is so sneaky! Great job keeping everyone in character. Can't wait to see what Rita actually writes.
person mary
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is getting good! Those eyes could belong to Lucius or Draco? Right? Looking forward to reading the next chapter!
person beeky63
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderful story from your enchanted quill. This promises to be absolutely delicious. Can't wait for more. Keep up the good work.
Toodles.
person aeltiera
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story and building up the plot with Sneaky Snape...I love your stories!
person Hypatia
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like how Snape manages to make his reputation as a former-or-maybe-current Deatheater the pinnacle of the deception, rather than cook up phony charges of Hermione's incompetence or something. Refreshing that he doesn't mind besmirching himself a little while getting Hermione fired. Perhaps Ms. Skeeter can concoct some other innuendoes between the two which will leave Hermione shocked (temporarily, anyway) and Sev starring in the role of oh-so-innocent comfortor?
person calamitysandra
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are a never ceasing wonder. This story seems to be going to be one hell of a ride.
If his plan backfires and Hermione finds out what he has done... Run Severus, run!

Sandra
person Laura
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really enjoying this...Severus thinks he'll get Hermione to himself simply to get the Curse cure but know he's going to get so much more! I'm looking forward to them getting to know each other- again- in a new way!
L
person a_reader
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Evil! Severus, for all his brains, is still pretty stupid. When Hermione finds out -- and you know she will (she will, won't she?) -- there will be hell to pay.
Of course, this all makes for great reading. :)
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmmm rita sure askes questions fast good chapter next one should be intresting