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This story is amazing!! I love the concept of her trying to find a defence against the unforgivable. You are very creative! I am looking foward to the update!! I'm with ya till the end!

~Sari

Wow, words are lacking to come out of my mouth. At first, I didn't want to read this story. Simply because it is unfinished and your stories are of the addictive kind. Once I started this story I was gone with the stream of words which seems so awfully big, but instead it just rushes me through every inch of the story. So far it is quite a nice plot. Snape is rather manipulating, as ever, and Hermione is a bit too dependent on him I think. But I'm sure that will change. Just like in the 'real books' Rita started to annoy me as soon as I say her name, not to speek about her being really an awful woman when she started the 'interview'. Nice to read that Snape really did want to get her away in a violently manner. I'm really looking forward to the next chapters, just because the characthers are so lively, and I am adoring Severus' bird. He should get a bigger role I think. And what makes the plants become resistent for the curse? And how is everyone going to react on Rita's article, especially Harry and Ron, I think a new friendship will be born when 2 others are going down. I'm really thinking of everything which can happen and all I can do is wait for you to end me from my misery! Please continue the writing,
Iris.

Chapter 10 - WOW - Eli did a fantastic job. Better watch out Severus. Keep up the great work.

In addition I would like to second Ladyofthemasque`s proposition about RestrictedSection. You really should post there, it is a great comunity.
I would have made this suggestion earlyer, but I was not shure if it would be aprobiate to tell you to post on a other side, within a review at AFF.

Sandra

Yes Severus has had it bad, and she is going to busy setting up the labs.

I think the elves are up to something if you ask me.

Great story, I like how you are bringing the plot along, and as for the lemons, I can definately wait for them as I enjoy the build up.

i love this fic and i also love that u update so fast. good job. keep it up

That Eli is such a hoot! Great chapter. :)

hmmmm sneaky snape fear he lost her job my ass lol good story update soon

not up to your usual standsrds i'm afraid...