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for A Maid in the Devil's Manor

by Ms_Figg

person Koda
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Crazy Rita bitch. Next chapter, for their reactions, please? ^^;
person ccrawley
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah, yet another great story from Ms_Figg. Looking forward to the next chapter.
person Maela
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Eli is hilarious! It's funny...when Severus was watching Hermione and then thought better of it, my thought was..."i'm so glad he's a gentleman." However...when Hermione found herself watching him, I laughed that she didn't turn away. Can't blame her though! Is that a double standard? :P
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awsome chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next! Update again and soon! As always you're a great writer!

Tiffany
person aeltiera
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love the way you are setting up Hermione and Snape...great anticipation for when they do finally "get together".
person Iris
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy that you posted this 10th chapter Ms Figg. It isn't a good or wonderfull one, it is a spectacular chapter. The ending, the last words were really giving me an image of how Severus was thinking, what could happen,.. but will it happen? I'm so damn curious, it's all because this story has so many options and it is up to you to show me where it is going. I love it that Eli is beginning to get a bigger part, however, I'm also longing to see how Hermione's investigation will turn out, how everybody will react to her, and maybe if she's going to Hogwarts to spend some time there. Or will there be a strange visitor, her ex or someone else maybe who's going to guide her in her dreams... Oh damn story, it is too persuative for my mind, and that Severus.. He's really done it this time, giving her all the things she need, but at the same time destroying her public life, he's awful, dangerous and I'm loving it. I don't know where your story is going to, but please, by all means, keep writing because I can't wait to read more!!
person snapescat
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is the usual excellent standard we have come to expect from you. Good stories and fast updates, what more could a cat ask for? purrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
person Ms_Figg
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hyp: lol. The house elves won't get in the way. Or, if they do watch, they'll probably be invisible. Hmm, now that's a question. Do house elves watch? Anyway, more than likely they have their own quarters to retire to at night. Or Sev could order them away.
person JW
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 12 - yup, I see see Rita's writing style as more fitting to a column than to a straight news article. More room for her to place unsubstantiated rumors!
person angel
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that mean old hag ... man what will happen now .. please please update soon

angel