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for A Maid in the Devil's Manor

by Ms_Figg

person Hope
schedule December 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL. awesome, I hate her she got was she deserved.
person Octavia
schedule December 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is absolutely brilliant!! (In fact, I read all your work, and always enjoy it emmensely) PLease continue!!! I must admit I'm dying to see, er, read them getting it on. ERven though I've read it a hundred times before in a hundred other stories. But It is always good, and you really write it the best! Your body of work is truly impressive, and I look forward to the rest of this tale. Where do you post the updates for this? WIKTT?

I think one of the best bits is that you maintain the snarkiness of Severus, which other authors often let fall out of the character. He really is alone, he really does suffer, but he certainly isn't the type to get all mushy about it once he decides to go goo-goo for Ganger. Have you ever heard that song "Disappointed" by Morrissey? I always think of Sev when I do. ("Yes, I am blind" is another one that makes me think of him, on the same album) Anyway. I really ought to be writing a term paper, but I needed my Severus fix. Please let me know when you update.
schedule December 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ROTFLMAO! That was an awsome update! I was laughing so hard when I read what Hermione said to the board and what she did to Rita! I loved it! I can't wait to read the mext update!

Tiffany
person Shadow Raven
schedule December 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!
*jumpng up and down*
YAY!!!!!
Go Hermione Go Hermione!
Great New Chapters!! *bows to authoress*
Shadow Raven
P.S. I'm on a sugar high. ^_____^
person carrie
schedule December 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hahahahahaha that was good
person Maela
schedule December 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Pft! :)
person angel
schedule December 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
~lol~ please more

angel
person JW
schedule December 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 18-19 - yay! Get 'em, Hermione!! Woot!! Now someone needs to kill Lucius; I'm sure he has something to do with the escaping Death Eaters. Hmm, is there a way to slip a little Veritaserum in his tea, as well as the tea or drinks of the folks Lucius is bribing? Or Cissa could kill Lucius before he tries to kill her! More, Ms_Figg!
person siriusluv
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, you are such a tease. Are they really going to talk that much about sex and not do it. Can't wait for the next chapter.
person Alauralen
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG these were some great chapters!!! Totally loved them!! You are a very creative writter who always has something new!! I love what you are doing with the story and I love that Severus is hung like a stallion! That was great!! Now she is evicted and she will just have to move in with him!! Gotta love Snape!! The man knows how to get what he wants! But what is she going to do when he decides that he wants her? Looks like from your hints that she is going to be too happy to ablige!!

Thank you for always updating so quickly!! Oh and I also loved how he handled that old woman!! He was very kind and gentle and that is a side that is very rarely seen, or if it is is overly exposed. You protray him very well and all I have to say is kudos to you!! Keep up the kick ass work and please keep the chapters coming!!

Alauralen