rate_review Reviews

Yeah..for SURE they're hungry...although those evil house elves can't simply give them plain PBJ or tunafish sandwiches, chips, etc.

Just when I think I've seen it all from you, Ms. Figg, you pull through with completely new scenes of sexual energy and unparalelled literary eroticism.

Whew! that was one hot wake up call!

No word on Rita yet?

Ch 47 - that's too good for Lucius! Kill him off! But I'm glad Ron and Harry finally left Snape Manor; Ron needs to get a life (and girlfriend?). Hmmm.... Ron and Rita? Nah! (heh-heh! had to say that!)

god was this funny, this chapter got me going! The passion and love! I love the line in chapter 46

*Happy sigh* Y'know, it's probably good you're doing these in chapter bits, otherwise I might never get anything done (not that I wouldn't thoroughly enjoy it).

That said, I'm up for the next round! :)

Will you marry me? I don't even know where to begin with this and I know I won't be able to say all that I want to. I only took 2 days to read all 46 pages, I couldn't wait any longer to see what would happen next. It was just brilliant. You know how to write and I can't wait to see what else you plan to do to this story. Every time I got to the bottom of the page, I read your notes and I didn't think the next page could load any slower. It's the best Fan Fiction I think I've ever read, and I read a lot. I'm honestly and struck for words. I can't think of anything that was wrong. Even though it drove me crazy, I love how you dragged it out. The suspense was immaculate and it kept me on the edge of my seat. You are amazing. From now on, all stories will have to live up to this one.

Insatiable. Your freakiness knows no bounds...slightly young grandmother of 6, you say? Hmmm...no wonder...

Ch 45 - I can identify with her impatience with that "beg for it" garbage. So now it's his turn next? I mean, it's like signing a contract - they BOTH have to sign! (heh-heh!) I guess Lucius can wait to die until morning....

Ch 46 - "a little elf-to-elf betting went on" - omigosh, that's hilarious! Of course Eli would win, but I still feel sorry for the little guy who lost three out of three bets. Hmm, maybe Severus and Hermione will do a little something in the garden one day, so this elf will "learn" something about them that even Eli doesn't know. Boy, those bedsheets are going to be messy by the time S&H actually eat a meal off each other.... Oh, Eli probably has the bathtub already set up for them!

Damn...Go Hermione