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for A Maid in the Devil's Manor

by Ms_Figg

person Jamie
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chap. 44 -- You know it's good when you make yourself hot. ;)

I was so happy to see this chapter after all of the AFF madness and cannot wait for more!
person melusinesara
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so glad to see Malfoy get what he deserves! and Rita as well. haha!
person Sari
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O_O damn!! that was definately worth the wait and the technical difficulties!! brilliant job there Ms_Figg!! More?

~Sari
person Laura
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHhhhhh.
(*Laura sits back, drinking tall glass of lemonade*)
Most excellent. I see a tale of revenge set 7 yrs in the future...
Very nice to see those loose ends tied up. I only hope that Rita does NOT find out who her tipster was...or that Hermione doesn't find out how Severus manipulated her life, even if it was to get her where she is now- very happy in his bed!
Can't wait for more. Your stories get better and better. :-)
Laura
person Phrynia
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT! VERY HOT! I NEED TO KNOW WERE I CAN GET ONE
OF THOSE HOUSE ELVES!...LOL...OR MAYBE I COULD JUST LIVE WITH SEVVIE!!
person melusinesara
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love a woman who takes control! LOL. brilliant chapter. I think the only thing hotter than reading that would be experiencing it hands-on. and since the boyfriend is several thousand miles away right now, I'll just have to settle for this incredibly, deliciously hot fic. *applauds*
person Vampire_Exotica
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*melts into a puddle on the floor* .........wow! ...just....wow!
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LMAO! Rita having to have a butt tuck! Yay! Lucius is going to prison! I can't wait to read more! Update again and soon!

Tiffany
person Maria
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I looooooove your stories Ms. Figg! This story has some delicious tension. May I make a small observation though? At the end of chapter 43 he is totally raring to go and give it to her hard, but then the next chapter seemed to switch gears, with him being softer and more patient. Hey, I'm going to love reading how he 'convinces' her to stay but I can't help wondering where all of his incredibly powerful energy went? Anyways, I'm not complaining, just observing. Please have them role play a hot teacher/student scene too, I love Snape as a dominant predator!
person droxy
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
for a moment there I thought they wouldn't do it. What a great chapter! wow- can't wipe the smile off my face. I had a terribly LONG day at work. This makes up for most of it.