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for A new beginning

by Toxic

person Anon
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I lke it

but think you need to have vikitor slip in accent a bit (just have him say vere (instead of where), vot for what) just do it every now and then \'cos he could slip up a bit
person neo-meo
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yeah man yeah thats what i'm talking about hermione fights back i love it already keep updating!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!