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for A new beginning

by Toxic

person misty676
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like this story a lot but i just wish the chapters could be a little more longer it feels like just when its getting good it stops so can you please write longer chapters and update soon please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person SammieCurls
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. Glad you updated so quickly. Please keep it up. Ouch! Blue balls. lol

Love always
Sammie Curls
person angel
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
~lol~ the howler that was great ... and now the hold school knows about ron and lav ... i cant was to read what happens next ..i cant wait in till the next chapter in till then keep up the wonderful work and later for now

angel
person Elvira Snape
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is WOW!!!! I really like that side of Hermione, and leave it to her to know some nice old, (do I dare say it) dark magic. I am so proud of our little Gryffendor. Ron and Lavendar deserve whatever those spells do. Ron is a prat and doesn't deserve her. I love the fact that Viktor came back as the DADA professor.
Can't wait for more!!!
person vador
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your fic is great. I want a lovesong between Harry and Hermione for this fic
person dumbeldore
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your fic is great. I want a lovesong between Harry and Hermione for this fic
person Pastel
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I love it. Update soon please.
person luffy
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your fic is great. I want a lovesong between Harry and Hermione for this fic
person Sammie Curls
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! I was so happy after reading this chapter, thinking there was at least one or two more that I could read but no, of course not. You had to stop there. Please update as soon as possbile. I can\'t wait to see what is going to happen next with this story.

Love always
Sammie Curls
person angel
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow great story i love it and what was the hex the mione put on lav and ron ... i cant wait in till the next update ...keep up the great work and later for now

angel