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for A new beginning

by Toxic

person Anon
schedule May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Megan Consoer
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Master Of The Poke World
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story
person Angela
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really do love this story, it has so much potential to go really anyway but boring. Keep it coming please!
person sln1987
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think it is fine that he is a teacher. Special assignments or special tutoring is always good. I dont think Dumbledore would mind too much, since he put Hermione in his care for detention. He always knows what is going on.
person misty676
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well i hope you really don't change victor to being a student because i think him being a teacher gives this story just the right edge , its just so bittersweet that i can't help it teacher / student relationships are one of my favorite kinks so forgive me if i offended your writing skills but alas if you do change it i will love it all the same update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Experience My Dreams
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story so far!! I can't wait for more chapters . . . Lord you have me hooked on two of your stories now!!!
person angel
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
leave him as the teacher ... i can help her out move that way... and she could all was come and help him out .. if that would help you .. he come talk to the headmaster after her detention and ask if she cam help him out and it will keep her and ron away from each other... hmm that is just a thought though.... you can use it if you want .. i like the story the was it is ... please update soon and keep up the awesome work ...later for now

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person Kelly
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i do not think you need to make him a student since there is not a large age diffrence between them and she knew him befor he was teacher , but if you think it will make it easier on you then do it.
person Emma
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think plotline is very good... for lack of a better word. I'm interesting to find where the story goes.... i like a vengeful hermione... keep up the good work