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for The Creature Within

by heika

person Annie
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this, its a great start and I love threesomes, creature!Harry and mates. I hope you update soon because I really want to know what happens next.

Hope your muses are good to you.

Happy Writings.
person Anon
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Omygosh! Harry/Draco/Voldemort! That is so hot! it\'s the first time i\'ve heard of them all together. Please continue with this, I can\'t wait for the next chapter!
person Athena
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked that, I look forward to more updates again soon. I hope Lucius got punished for hurting Draco like that.
person anonymous
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great Job! you\'ve got me hooked. please update soon, i know you said you will, but so do most people and then it\'s like months before they update, don\'t let this story die! very well written! scrumptious!
person Yana
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
poor Harry lol
will he escape
person Kat Potter
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mmmmm i liked it. Can\'t wait for more
person akuma_river
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely LOVE it!!!

Keep up the awesome work, coolsa.
person sbkar
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked it...and I\'ll ask you to remove that \"it will be bad\" comment from the disclaimer. There are a great many stories on this site that should be considered \"bad\", but yours is not one of them.

A misplaced semi-colon which should be replaced by a comma...pfft! You\'re doing 100 times better than many.
person yamimana
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really love it so far. The idea is great.
Please update soon.
person volume
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
how soon is soon?:)