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for The Creature Within

by heika

person bella
schedule December 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting plot... HP/LV pairing included... and also a creature-fic... Loved reading it... keep writing... =)
person genkaku
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hehe...I GOT AN ACCOUNT! and by "I" I mean your beloved friend Liz.

oh man, when will you get to the pr0n!!! this chapter was so close, but so far... sigh...

er...keep up the good writing! and, if you'd like, i could beta... ....... ..........?
person genkaku
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ps: i laughed so hard at the back washing part...did you know wolfram says like exactly that to yuuri? XD
person nore
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like where this story is going, keep up the good work.
person ryuuta
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hot, hot! Although jealous people are not a pleasant sight, I hope they'll work it out and won't leave poor Harry hungry :P
person screamguy
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O-o Hmmm . . . . I think you might be on to something....Draco...Voldemort....and Harry...Huh. Rather interesting this, heh. And you actually wrote Voldy along the lines he should be written as.^_^ Finally.
person Nightwing
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww, great chapter.
I'm looking forward for more
Chow for now!
person Yana
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cool chappy i love it
person Pimpshit
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
SWEET! I TOTALLY L.O.V.E-LOVE this story! it's one of the coolest and most unique ones i've read in a LONG time! Keep it comming! :) also u maaay want to rethink when u update...personally i have not problem with it but i dont want you to over tax yourself on the weekends! Monday to Friday is a long way a way but Friday to Monday doesn't give that much time for brainstorming for new chappy's. kay well thats all my input! love and peace out! BYE!
person Storm
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. I liked it. Can't wait for the next.