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I LOVE your story and I was wondering about somethings like why aren't any of the Fontaine's Parseltongue's? Why didn't they envoke the castle to help out in the backlash? Who really is the Heir of Slytherin amongst them? these are just some questions I have, but, by far the most important is, when are you going to update this wonderful story? Hope for an update soon Selene

thanks for spacing it out... much easier on the eyes

Interesting idea... Ive enjoyed the story thus far... Please work on your spacing though as it is very painful on the eyes to have just one lump of sentences

Please do not kill Harry. I know that at this stage he is not really a central character but a side character to the Fountaines. Please let him live and have fun with Annissa (was that spelt correctly?) and with their support, take out Voldemort. I believe that Harry still has to develop full control over his magic and that he may be more powerful that he appears. Please develop this and have the Fountaine boys give him some training. I really do not like how unprepared he is generally in most stories.