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December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
been awhile since I've seen a few BDSM-esque fics in Dramione. I like what you're doing with the story!
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December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think this is a great story. I love the way things are going between those two and it is hot. I think it is interesting that you made Draco a virgin but Hermione is NOT! Quite different from other stories. Please update soon and thanks for writing this.
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December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Likie Likie :).
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December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Like, definitely LIKE!
Will we find out what happened to Snape?
Will we find out what happened to Snape?
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December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you updated. But it looks like there is a word missing. The paragraph where Hermione responds to Minerva just starts. "Smiling. Minerva...." and then it goes on. I figured out that Hermione was doing the talking, but I think you might need to fix that. Oh, and it's in the chapter before all the bedroom activities. About how much longer do you envision this to be? :D
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December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think .. no, I know that that was the BEST sex scene I have ever read on Aff.net. Omg .. it was great, I swear I could picture the whole thing in my mind. Awesome job, seriously.
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December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow! I just found this tonight and I have to say... I'm frickin hooked! I admit hermione strikes me as just a tiny bit out of character, but you know what? The story is so good I can overlook it easily! AWESOME! One thing... When you use quotes, there isn't a space between the opening quote and the first letter of the spoken word. It makes all the quote marks look like closing quotes, instead of opening quotes... (did that make any sense?) Oh well... Anyway! I love it and I look forward to more!
ShilohDarke
ShilohDarke
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November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
more soon? please?
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November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I searched for your story to read it and was not diasppointed. One thing though, how about longer chapters for those of us who think that your idea is so original it should win an award? Just asking. I'll be reading as long as you keep doing this kind of writing.
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October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Soooo glad you updated! I wish you would also post at CG or even Dramione. I don't get to this site as often as I used to. :D