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for The Dream.

by Solaris

person papercuts187
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Not a bad idea for the plot but the way it was written was a bit redundant, kind of makes the reader want to skim it.
person Alice
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I didn't mean my other review as a flame! I just think your story would be so much better, if you put some more work into keeping Draco in character... the idea behind the story is good, but it's just a dissappointment that Draco is so soft and unlike himself!

You have managed to capture Ginny's character very well, btw... good luck with your future writing.
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
have you posted this story before because i remeber this exact story from somewhere ? o and good job well writtin and i like alot of the fics you write