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for How To Disappear Completely

by AppleFiend

schedule February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow i love this story so far but i hate cliffhangers please update soon
schedule January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A riveting story so far. I'd noticed a few typos in the first four chapters, but you've written this very well, indeed. What you need to do is update a little more regularly so readers can rely on the story being under their noses to pull more reviews. It's hard for a reader to stay high on a story that 'disappears'! Please, do update ... good storyline.
person Delfin
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh man :O

poor hemione, I hope Sevvie helps her!
person Anon
schedule August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapter?
person Megan Consoer
schedule July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Hermione. What's going to happen next? I can't wait to find out. Update again and soon.

Tiffany
person sbrande
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am intrigued and want more. Please update soon... I can't wait to see what happens next...
Poor Hermione, but she is strong and will survive. I hope Sev. comes to the rescue.. Hmmm!!!
Cheers, Sonia
person Killer Kadoogan
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooo, good story!!! Please continue! Update soon. Happy writing! Tengo que irme! Salud!
Killer K
person Know-it-all
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How exciting! This is interesting and well written. I can\'t wait for the next chapter!
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I can\'t wait to read the next chapter! It\'s a great story so far! Please update soon!

Tiffany