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by typingmonkey

person funkmasterjo
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, good command of your wording.


Not a bad plot or theme, either... but is this complete? It would be nice if there were more to it!
person Phoenix2500
schedule November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow @_@ pretty good, definitly should add more chapter =P could be great