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for Missing You

by Tigerrr

person Emmie
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello again! I\'m so excited!! Its almost time for them to meet!! yay! this was a good part of the story, and quite the cliffhanger if I may say so! Grammar and spelling were perfect, except for one part when you said the \"who-to magazines\" and I think you meant \"how to.\" If so, don\'t worry, I do that all the time. You still rock!! Bye!
person Shdwcat27
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh. an update already. You\'re just awesome.
person Anguloce
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is really sweet! and yes, snape and trent reznor could be brothers.
person Hypatia
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ladytalon-

Yes, there is a resemblance between Trent Reznor and Alan Rickman\'s Snape, but I think Rowling\'s version of him is more like Tiny Tim (that weird guy from the 1960\'s)
person SnapesPet30
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! I wonder how Hermione will take seeing her family again, will she faint, scream or think she has gone completely mad. Update soon, you got me hooked :)
person Shdwcat27
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant story. Please update soon.
person Yabo
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great start and yes Trent and Snape look just alike.
person beeky63
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. I really like the way that Severus and the twins were out of sync with time instead of showing up 9 years in the future. An original idea, its great! Can\'t wait for the next chapter, poor Hermione is about to get the shock if her life. Well done,
Toodles.
person Sari
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the concept of this story!! Keep up the good work hun, this is fantastic.

~Sari
person Don
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOh! What a great start! Hope there will be updates soon!