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for Missing You

by Tigerrr

person Mada
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg, rezner is so hot! If i ever imagined snape as anything, it was rezner.
person Marlina
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NEXT!! hehehe..
person hermioneandseverusfan82
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i see someone else likes the idea of sirius black and madam rosemerta togther. read my story sponge baths it has them plus hermione and severus and james and lily.
person Emmie
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, its over! I\'m so sad!! I like the ending so much!! Do we see a sequel in the future? Please? Maybe about the twins adventures at Hogwarts or adjusting to having four kids for Sev and Hermione... just someting! I do like your writing style, and this story has been a joy for me to read. If you ever want help with anything, or your just bored and you want to talk, please email me at atorcolini@wavecable.com. It has been a pleasure to work with you, and I\'m glad to know that you were only teasing. Don\'t ever be offended by what I say. I know damn well that no one is perfect, believe me. I messed up plenty of times in my own story, so don\'t worry. Also, I do like Bed Checks.. I thought it was a great story, and hot enough. So don\'t worry about that, and keep updating it! All my love,
Emmaline
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was an awsome story! A bit confussing at the beginning, but it all made sense in the end! I love it! Awsome writing!

Tiffany
person beeky63
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I loved the last chapter especially the fight between Severus and Sirius. I look forward to your next story.
Keep up the good work.
Toodles.
person Emmie
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, perhaps I could assumet that you are calling me the know it all? That is ok. I\'m sorry if you think I\'ve been hard on you. I am just trying to tell you what I found and what I like or dislike about the story. Please don\'t take it the wrong way. As for these two new chapters, well, I like them. They are very good and I noticed no mistakes. Your writing flows well and I enjoy reading it. Please keep up all of your good work, and know that you are a better writer than I could ever be! I eagerly await the next update! Much love,
Emmaline
person ancientgirl
schedule November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m glad she finally got to see them. I\'m looking forward to Hermione getting to know her kids.
person snapeslave
schedule November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh i so love this story...i am bawling my eyes out...you are just too good...next update soon i hope...and thanks for making it 2 chapters i don\'t know how i would have made it to wait for this one...holy shit...keep up the great work...gotta go get more kleenex now...but don\'t let that stop you...lol...
person AJ
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I didn\'t really get the last chapter. The first part yes, the last part no. How are they now so much older? I thought they were two and went 9yrs into the future when they would be the same age but in another time. Don\'t get it.