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for Be Careful in the Dark

by SilentCall

person galfromparis
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Heeyyy !! I so loove your story !! Though I'm not a SS/HG shipper i read it because it is so well written that i got completely wrapped u^in in it !! I would appreciate a bit of HG/HP in this but carry on anyway it's great ! update soon but take your time (if you know what i mean).
person *DB*
schedule November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
@20. OMG this story is awesome, i like the personality of hermione and her dark side!!! Please update soon.
person elementaldeity
schedule November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm reviewing after reading chapter five and have plenty of chapters to go yet. But before I finished and forgot what an impact your story has had on me, I had to review now. I must stay that you do not get enough credit and review for such a beautifully written piece. I know some may say beautiful is not the correct word to apply to such a dark beginning, but I believe it is. Hermione is well rounded and just still innocent enough, and you have developed her so far that I want to keep reading and forget to feed my kids. Lol. Anyway, I just wanted to let you know that I understand that it seems like you haven't gotten enough reviews and credit for this, probably have shocked some readers to silence. I go on to chapter six and apologize that I am not the type of reviewer to critique each chapter. But I assure you, that you will surely hear from me at least once more. I hope to god that this is a completed fic, otherwise I'll reach the last chapter you have posted and cry.

elementaldeity
person jetuke
schedule October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your story, can't stop reading it. Please update soooooon!
person ilovekc
schedule October 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have to admit I have never left a review before, but I love your story. I think the plot and writing is brilliant, and you are adept at drawing the reader in. I can not wait for more.
person Lady Lynn
schedule October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a wonderful fic and I hope you update as often as you can, I'll be waiting!
person Lyssa
schedule September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was sweet!
person Lyssa
schedule September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story...I was beginning to think you had given it up...but I an glad that you didnt...I hope to get an update soon.
person Tiraspy
schedule September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THIS IS AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Anon
schedule September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is actually quite good, you should continue it ASAP!!!!