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for Be Careful in the Dark

by SilentCall

person vannilla
schedule October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh my god!!!!!!
that was hott!!!!
person vannilla
schedule October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that red envelope rocked
i wonder what the chinese library is like
wow some honesty there at the end
touching:)
person vannilla
schedule October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nooooo
only 6 more chapters to go
but this was a good chapter
yay snape will come back
sexual tension between hermione and harry ...yay
will avery die soon?
person vannilla
schedule October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
action was steamy
neville story had me laughing
although i did notice that harry said the only reason ro wouldnt get the same treatment was because ron was straight....is this a hint?
lol
oh my last thought as the final words of the chapter registerd was
"oh snap,crackle,pop!!!"
lol
dont ask
person CoCoM
schedule August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting...what is the plan about the future??? I hope that we get to see Lucius play a large role in this fic (and not end up dead like Draco!).
schedule March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dark!Hermione kicks ass! I love it!
schedule August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story, please continue it.
schedule March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. How in the hell does this not get more reviews? This is wonderfully constructed and told. You've got a masterful style that quickly coaxes a reader into suspending all disbelief in such a way that they never notice it's gone. Keep on writing, and I'll keep reading and reviewing!

~LZ
schedule March 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love where this is going. I love the idea of a dark Hermione. Please continue as soon as possible. I can't wait to read more.
person Snakelette
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is wonderful! I'd love more chapters and more Snape would be very nice too.