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for Be Careful in the Dark

by SilentCall

person vannilla
schedule October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
haha!!!!!!!!
that's what she promised!
she did it!!!!!
oh crap they're fucked
but i thought she'd taken all the dark magic out of him?
why is he there??!!!!!
gahhh!!!
person vannilla
schedule October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
chapter 1 was wow
so dark
is it wrong that im happy about what she did??
oh well
lol
on to ch.2
person vannilla
schedule October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
chapter two is very interesting
i dont like that she felt bad about what she did before she heard of the muggle killings,she shouldnt have made that decision if she wasnt ready to do it
i ofcoarse fully understand her guilt for the killings
its so sad so many innocent people died
i wonder what the plan is?
well onto ch.3
person vannilla
schedule October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WHAT?!!
WHAT begins now?!!!!
**bites nails and continues reading**
person vannilla
schedule October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg that soo freaking kool!!!!!!!!!!
person vannilla
schedule October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
no no more mistakes!!!!
why!!!!!!!
oh to chapter 6
person vannilla
schedule October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!!!!!
person vannilla
schedule October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HOLLY SHIT!!!
CHAPTER 8 NOW!!
person vannilla
schedule October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
VERY IMPRESSIVE
although hiding the wand seemed painful
and the letters were a great touch
person vannilla
schedule October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok the earlier HOLLY SHIT,4-get it!!!!
THIS IS A HOLLY SHIT.OMG .WOW.AGHHHHHHH.**SCREAMS HAPILY***CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!
CHAPTER 10 here i come!