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for Be Careful in the Dark

by SilentCall

person sbrande
schedule March 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Another excellent chapter. Am looking forward to the next one.

Love Sonia :)
schedule December 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Can I just say how much I love this story? I found it by chance, and so glad I did, because never had I thought a fic where Hermione was the main character could be so consuming! Your take on dark!Hermione is amazing. I think I read a few fics where she had taken on a darker side, but it was nothing close to this. All her emotions were so real. The way she felt after killing Draco, paranoid, afraid, was so on par. Her alter-ego, Shadow, is both chilling and entertaining to read. A part of me feels like Shadow will end up taking over her completely.

I love the S/H, and H/Hr pairings. I don't read them often, but those I feel are two of the most intense fanon pairings. Congrats on pulling me into this amazing, and original piece of work. I hardly read Het, but you really got me with this one. Haha. Keep up the good work, and please update soon!


schedule July 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I usually do my best to avoid Hr/SS because it squicks me out but I cannot get enough of your story. It is completely original and full interesting twists, turns, revelations, and story lines. You actually have me reading a Hr/SS fic, which is quite the accomplishment (although I just skim through their sex scenes). I love what you've done with Pansy, your OC's, and Hermione's journey. I'm looking forward to your next update.
person sbrande
schedule March 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I truly hope that in the end Severus will end up with Hermione, just for all the crap that they have been through together, and no one can dispute the sexual tension between them.

I have been following this story on the Restricted Section in it's early days, but I much prefer it here.

Thanks for the update, I shall await the next one.

Love Sonia :)
person bluezy
schedule February 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love the way you made Hermione into this super spy and the way you use her greatest success (well one of 'm, namely killing Lucius Malfoy) into a great failure by resurrecting him. I look forward to your next installment.

bluezy
person sbrande
schedule February 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter my dearest.

Love Sonia :)
schedule January 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I have to say that I am so enthralled by this fic that I'm salavating at the mouth waiting for another chapter. I do so hope to see one soon. It gets better and better as the chapters go on. Lots of love and success for future chapters!
person bkworm22
schedule January 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love this story, so glad to find it here! (is this going to be HG/SS?) if it is, you will find a lot more readers putting it in that category. I am a huge HG/SS fan, but even if it doesn't end up that way, I'm enjoying this story anyway! This latest twist with Lucius, is pretty interesting...
person DanniKay
schedule January 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
First off... Holy... Shit..!
That being said; you have an AMAZING story going here. I absolutely cannot wait for you to update ^.^ You're really doing quite an amazing job on this... Not that you needed me to tell you that :) but I did anyway :P
Cheers,
Danni
person Anon
schedule September 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have very much enjoyed this story. The characters are well developed and, I have a hard time understanding who the shadow really is. Good job, and I hope to see this to the end.