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Hey babe, just a quick one. I have been following this story for years now and was wondering if you are going to flesh out the story more or just leave us with these snippets? Please let me know...

Love Sonia :)

This last chapter is spectacular! I could see it all playing out in my head and it was mind-blowing. Keep writing this fantastic story, please.

What was chapter 47/48 about? It was choppy.
I've been enjoying your story until I reached this chapter.
why are there sections in brackets? its very distracting from the story.
On to the next chapter.

Well, it's been over a year and, true to your second Author's Note in the last chapter, you haven't found time to finish this ABSOLUTELY FABULOUS story. I have a suggestion. You say you already had the plot all figured out in your head. Could you just sum it all up for us in a couple of paragraphs? Summarize the plot points and we can elaborate how it unfolded in our own imaginations? I think that's better than leaving the whole thing unfinished. If you ever do decide to come back to this story and finish it, you can delete the summary and carry on. Please? I'd really like to know how it all turns out.

I have really enjoyed reading this story. It is inventive and original and shows a more realistic path for Hermione to start being a superman character than other stories I've read. I hope you manage to sit down and hash out how it ends and of course let us know!

So sad to hear that you aren't planning to finish this incredible story.... I'm glad to have read it. Good luck with your other writings, but if you ever finish this one, I will be truly grateful !

You as an author have exceptional talent for complex story lines and well thought out plots and characters. If I have a criticism it is that you sometimes make it more complicated then it needs to be. One of the corners that you have painted yourself into is the destroying of the horcruxes. The first horcrux was destroyed by basilisk venom, and so can the others. The basilisk is still in the chamber of secrets in your plot line and being a magical beast and totally impervious to decomposition it still has venom that could be used. Even if it is decomposed there is still a fang that could be used to destroy the horcrux. Also the Sword of Grifindor has been imbued with basilisk venom and is used in canon to destroy the horcrux locket. Harry's blood also has basilisk venom in it that could be used. So the means of destroying the remaining horcruxes is already present in your storyline, so why not use it. Hope this suggestion helps. The little plot bunny of Lucius being the Reaper and being brought back by Necromancy is easy to get rid of. The tenants of Necromancy is that the creatures brought forth by the Necromancer are locked into his soul. As each part of Moldyshorts soul is killed the creatures should get weaker and will die when Moldy does right along with all the remaining DeathEaters. I like this story and you as an author and can not give you enough praise. I was a technical writer and proof reader for a few years while I was Teaching Trade school. Unfortunately I don't have the imagination to write fiction, but I do know what I like to read and what works for a good story. I can not wait for your next installment.

It's a shame that this story won't be completed. I enjoyed the plot and wanted to see where it would take Hermione and her double life. I even checked on this story the other day, out of curiosity, and hadn't realized that it had been almost 1.5 years since the last update. Hopefully, you'll be inspired to write for this story at some point again.

I am still with you babe, following your story.

Keep up the great work.

Love Sonia :)

I'm not sure if I've ever reviewed this. Maybe on restricted section - that's possible. It's a shame if I haven't because I've been reading it for the past three years and it's one of my absolute favourite fics of all time. It's just perfect. Harry's perfectly executed and Hermione is brilliant and gah! I love it. Don't ever stop writing it. I don't care about long lapses between chapters at all. I'd wait five years for the next chapter as long as I get to read it!

So yeah, overall - overly excellent story. Yes, I'm dying to read the next chapter but I'm also willing to wait for it.

You're awesome.

- Anda