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November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please continue. I am wondering why Harry does not hex Draco and why Draco can just get away with hexing others.
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November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good start!
but i need more ;)
but i need more ;)
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November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MY GOD! Wow, fantastic! Make it a full story, PLEASE! I loved the way you wrote it, most of veela fics are kind of silly, with Harry all over Draco right at the beggining. But The Bond its perfect! Your Harry was perfect! He way he acted was exactly the way I thought he would if he discovered he was Dracos mate. And Draco too, all possessive and jealous! I LOVED IT!
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November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YES MAKE IT A FULL STORY. I thought there was more chapters. so dissapointed when i saw that it was only one, please update. Just one little suggestion, there are a few grammar mistakes throughout, you may want to be careful, but otherwise excellent story. NOw i\'m on my hands and knees begging for an update.
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November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I really like this story. It\'s good. I hope you write more. I\'ve read a lot of Veela Draco mates with Harry stories - they\'re really popular - and yours is one of the better ones. I hope to see more, soon!
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November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wicked story! I loved it, it\'s great having something different in these stories...one not being human and all that. I hope Draco and Harry have a happy ending..
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November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please continue this. I love Veela fics, and I\'m glad this one doesn\'t have Harry all \"oh, ok then, then lets go shag now cause we mysteriously fell in love in the last ten minutes.\" Please do continue.
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November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HELL yea u should make this a full story!!
luvedd it!
UPDATE SOON!!!
luvedd it!
UPDATE SOON!!!
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November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes please continue I want to see what happens. I have quite the soft spot for possesive dominant Draco. I love your fic and really hope to see more soon. Oh and I like that you made it Luna he was seeing it was a nice twist even though I feel sorry for the girl.
Angel Lain
Angel Lain
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November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It made me smirk a lot. I liked it, carry on. Mind the best bit was right at the end
when the author was talking to Harry and Draco, if It was my story, which it isn\'t I would
keep that in the story all the way through.
Thank you for a good beginning. Best wishes,
when the author was talking to Harry and Draco, if It was my story, which it isn\'t I would
keep that in the story all the way through.
Thank you for a good beginning. Best wishes,