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November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey!
I\'d love to see this story continued! Its really good -- I love dominant!Draco and submissive!Harry, though not so much of the loving of homophobe!Harry. Still, its all part of the story, right? Can\'t wait for it to be updated!
SkyeLight2x1
I\'d love to see this story continued! Its really good -- I love dominant!Draco and submissive!Harry, though not so much of the loving of homophobe!Harry. Still, its all part of the story, right? Can\'t wait for it to be updated!
SkyeLight2x1
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November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is great! I adore bottom!Harry, I just hope he succumbs to the bond soon! Also, the conversation between Draco and Harry afterwards was hilarious! Go bondage and Draco carrying Harry out of the Great Hall!
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November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes, a Veela-fic! Very delicius... ^^ I love Harry as a sub, I hope you\'ll never make him a seme! He\'s a bottom, for ever and ever... XD
For the fic, I like your style. Some weird grammatics can be found, but nothing that seroius, it\'s clear.
I hope Harry won\'t give up so easily, but that nevertheless, will, in the end. So, to get there, we need you to write more!
Little me want\'s more of this fic and sweet little sub-Harry! ^^
For the fic, I like your style. Some weird grammatics can be found, but nothing that seroius, it\'s clear.
I hope Harry won\'t give up so easily, but that nevertheless, will, in the end. So, to get there, we need you to write more!
Little me want\'s more of this fic and sweet little sub-Harry! ^^
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November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cannpt wait for more... I agree with Draco. Definitely needs some more bondage and Harry/sub action. I loved the little thing at the very end between you, Harry, and Draco. I thought it was comical.
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November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^_^ this is sooooooooooooooooooo ANNOYING! what is it with you people and stopping at the wrong time! it was just getting good!!
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November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I agree with Harry. Turn it intoa full story! It was brilliant! That and it leaves one hanging. -^ ~- Lovely little insight, though! -CARIO-
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November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lovely story, I just love the forceful Draco and the Harry in denial. Please continue with the story. : ) : )
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November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg keep on going for the love of god!
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November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m not sure what was better, the story or the commentary at the end. But please continue writing it
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November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More!!!!! You\'ve gotta continue!