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December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Not bad, not bad at all. But it could use some more details durring sex or more sex scenes. I'm not sure witch it is: lack of details or to little scenes. Either way they look great just the way they are (confused yet? :)). Everyone has his or hers stile. But Great Stories are Great Stories :D. Love them. Waiting for more. :D:D:D
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December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hera you sure are confusing. Don't listen to him/her. You're stories are great. Keep up the good job. I am cheering for you *waves huge banner around* :D. Bazai sharingan154.
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November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A very interesting story. I would definately like to see more of this, has great potential.