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for A Piece of Forever

by lissie

person blondiexoxo
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww thats so sweet but i hate alyssa that bitch oh and lucius too gods i hate both of them. Cant wait to read more chapters
person Stacy
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sweet Chapter!
Gosh, its so frusterating, I wish they would just get together,
but then that would be the end of the story,lol
person me
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooooh this is such a fantasticly great story!! i cant wait till the next chapter! please up date. You're great at making it sad, yet believable you know. there are tons of fanfics that are just horribly written, but you're doing GREAT with this one
person Me
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MORE PLEASE! SOON!

person blondiexoxo
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey cool i like it alot hope u keep more chapters comin and fast lol well cnat wait for more chpters
person Stacy
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!
I liked how you tied in the ice cream! :)
person Phie
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What happened 2 chapter 5 & 6? It makes me sad...i was looking 4ward 2 the next chapter...could u pwease update? *begs*
person Anon
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww i love this story.
person Anon
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww i love this story.
person Stacy
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter!