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for A Piece of Forever

by lissie

person Jo
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great update! One question though: did Loki write the story of Hermione being the third party or is she just researching all this stuff out of her own curiosity? I was a little confused about her motives...
person Petalsoft
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, so sad... I hope this turns out to be a happy ending. Nicely written chapter!
person summer rayne
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It doesnt matter if it was a short chapter. this story has me completely hooked. Please update soon. I have to know what happens next.
person whatever
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love the story hate the sadness of it and i hate the original character that you made harry's girlfriend i don't u could call me selffish but all of harry lovey dovey stuff with her makes me mad because at the same time hermione is off still sad sometimes in this story i just wish that she could pack up all of her things and leave to start off new just in spite of them but whatever i hope you update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!
person mstrsofmayhm
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is such a good fanfic. It was filled with so much emotion that it brought me to tears. It was well written and just soo good! I absolutely can not wait until you add more chapters and this fic is finished. Keep it up!
person !!!!!!
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my fucking god......UPDATE NOW!!!! THIS IS SO GOOD!!!!!! ::hugs it::
person Petalsoft
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was so sweet. Loved it. I want them together, dammit. LOL
person lara
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooh that was great!

update now! lol

great job
person Phantasia
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really great update.Keep up the good work.
person blondiexoxo
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww thats so sweet but i hate alyssa that bitch oh and lucius too gods i hate both of them. Cant wait to read more chapters