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for A Piece of Forever

by lissie

person whatever
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this was a very realistic chapter and it made sense and about the oc u created i still don't like her i don't know maybe its the way you write her oh well update soon
person ^^
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think I love you....even if it was a series of flashbacks.....they were still amazing!
person myself
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooh i luve it!
but im a bit confused
in chap 10, who wrote the article w/the head lines "hermione granger-third party"? i understand loki didnt but who did? or is that just a twist...oooh lol

great story

person Stacy
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great!
I can't wait to read more!
person Anon
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love it!!!!! update as soon as possible!!!!
person Jo
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah thanks! Another great chapter by the way...update soon!
person Happyhoppypeople
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm so pleased to see a story where draco cheats on hermione. Not that I don;t want them to stay togethor and all, but it was such an opportunity to explore their relationships. I didin't like the flash backs so much, but everything else in your story is really sweet. I can't wait untill you update.
person Stacy
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a sweet chapter!
person blondiexoxo
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwwwww that's so sweet and sad can't wait to read more
person Zara_luvs_QTs
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That has got to be one of the most touching chapters in any fanfic I've read in a long time. Congratulations! You rock!