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for A Piece of Forever

by lissie

person Hanna Delacour
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Still amazing... I'm gonna wager a guess that Lucius had a hand in Draco and Hermione's breakup, and if so, I hope Draco grows a spine before the end of this fic. I love it and I think you are a marvelous writer. Keep up the good work!
person Lensa
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok....YOu must continue! I wish your chapters were longer, but your characters are very interesting...Please update soon

person Erin
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think it's really good and really sad. I seriously can't wait for the next chapter. Your writing is amazing and I already want them back together. Plus, I want that Alyssa girl dead. I'm so horrible sometimes. Keep up the great work!
person Stacy
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was great, I can't wait till the next chapter!
person Stacy
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww...that chapter was so sad!
I almost cried.
person Bridget
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far. I can tell that you are really trying to make it a good story, not just something you threw together. I think you should contiune writing it because I do see a lot of potential in what you've written so far, although you could easily put your prologue and 1st chapter together. I don't know if you have your whole story planned out or not, but if you don't you've given yourself a good deal of room to work with. I don't quite understand with Draco was at a church, but maybe it makes sence to you. Also, how old are they souppsoed to be? Anyways, keep up the good work, I really like what I have read so far.



person jenny
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
its SOO SOOO SOOOO GOOD i love it i love it u should keep on writing this story cuz ur a talented writer i luv this story and plz dont stop until its complete lol
person Stacy
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great start, man, i\'m dying to know what he has to tell her!

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