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November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Right now I find myself wishing that I wasn\'t an atheist, so that I could beg some deity to have mercy on me. I\'m going to be overly polite and say that this fic isn\'t very good at all.
The summary, while lacking important things like capitalization and punctuation, leads us to believe that we can expect an exciting, emotion filled fic, with interesting build up but the truth couldn\'t be further from that. This thing makes cheap porn look deep. There is no build up, nor do they \"find out their love for eachother is more than brotherly\". They simply have sex with no reason whatsoever. Not even very good sex, at that.
I\'m not even going to start on your spelling or the godawful way you did their characterization, or more specifically, the lack thereof.
I\'ve read quite a bit of wonderfully written Weasley twincest in my time, and you\'d do well to do the same thing as a learning experience, before even considering attempting again.
The summary, while lacking important things like capitalization and punctuation, leads us to believe that we can expect an exciting, emotion filled fic, with interesting build up but the truth couldn\'t be further from that. This thing makes cheap porn look deep. There is no build up, nor do they \"find out their love for eachother is more than brotherly\". They simply have sex with no reason whatsoever. Not even very good sex, at that.
I\'m not even going to start on your spelling or the godawful way you did their characterization, or more specifically, the lack thereof.
I\'ve read quite a bit of wonderfully written Weasley twincest in my time, and you\'d do well to do the same thing as a learning experience, before even considering attempting again.