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November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You\'ve made an interesting start and I look forward to reading more. Hopefully lots more and frequently.
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November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It\'s a good start. I would like to know where this will be going, so please continue.
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November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm so are Harry going to USA? Nice beginning, hoping for some more soon.
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November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good beginning. I like it. I can\'t wait to see what happens next. I very much like your characters. So far I see no problems really, Great job for your first try. Keep up the good work
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November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interestin start. I look forward to reading what develops.
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November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting names. Can\'t wait for chapter 2!
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November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT I\'m alreadly hoocked[sp] please please please UPDATE A S P
THANKS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
THANKS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Don\'t worry, you\'re doing fine; I really enjoyed this first chapter. You are going to post more, right? Well, either way I\'ll be looking forward to updates.
~Night Shade
~Night Shade
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November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
did u get the title from the poem \"The Lamb?\" I cant remember who it was written by, but it is often paired with the poem the tiger. By the way, your writing is very good.
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November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow it\'s the first chapter and I\'m loving it. More More