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Just as long as they\'re original characters, and not Bellatrix and Narcissa. Those two bore me to death!!!

Ms_Figg,

Thank you for clarifying the purpose of your story. The problem I had with it didn\'t have so much to do with content per se, but more to do with that I perceived to be your - dare I say \'permissiveness\' - of the actions Snape took. I\'m glad to hear (or perhaps \'read\' is a better term?), that you did not intend to condone his angst-ridden counter-attack.

Charmy so right! Thank you. Changed it to Lucius Malfoy. :)

I like this so far. I can definetely see Snape becoming such a bitter man from the combination of being a social misfit in school along with being betrayed by a woman. I love how you write Snape in all your stories - very forceful and dominant. BTW - according to canon, Lucius is older than Severus by about five years (I can\'t recall if it was book 4 or 5 that the Daily Prophet stated he was 42 - I think - and JKR said in an interview that in book 4 Snape is 35 or 36.) I know it doesn\'t really matter to the story, and I like stories that have them as school friends, but I\'m just making an observation. I\'m really looking forward to reading the next chapter - abusive Severus makes me so horny I\'m sure it\'s not healthy!

Maria: Thanks for that. I\'ve changed Lucius to an OC, Felton. Man, I\'ve got to get my timelines straight. sigh. Yes, bad Severus is soo soo good.