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for The First Heartbreak of Severus Snape

by Ms_Figg

person Sarah
schedule June 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the best Severus Snape stories I have ever read. It is a dark and deep insight to the man who would grow up to join Voldermort and serve as a spy for Dumbledore. Great Job!!!
person darklori
schedule January 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It wasn't an ugly story, it's definitely cruel, but never ugly. It was well-written, well-thought of and though it may hurt some adoring snape fans, what he's done is truly understandable. You bite a snake, he bites back. Take it from a girl tormented and hurt throughout high school...
person Quasi
schedule November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Genius. Pure genius.
person Kaley
schedule June 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have loved everything you have written and this story was phenomenal. I like Severus like this. Stories which paint him soft and soppy seem to me bland and "mills and boon-ish" - like they are not really about him. Severus' character isn't warm and fuzzy. Sorry to have to admit that Subrina's treatment at his hands didn't seem like that much of a punishment to me (pensive aside). Thanks for all your wonderful work which I have only recently discovered. Kaley
person Sally
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You go, girl! It takes guts to write stuff like this. This had the sourest lemons on the market, but hey, it makes the lemons in your other stories all the sweeter.
person JW
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just read this in one shot - well-done, although I wish SIRIUS had been punished more. Hmm, perhaps all the Hogwarts girls saw what happened and avoided Sirius? But Lily Evans Potter still made Sirius her son's godfather... nope, Sirius should've been punished more. Perhaps another story? Thanks for posting!
person MaryElla
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! That was an emotionally powerful story. It was very well written, and your description of the situation was clear. It truly made my heartstrings twist under the strain. The end wrapped up a little quickly, I would have drawn it out a bit more. Yet, as a short story it was, and is, a well crafted treasure.
person Maria
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooooooooooo.....you do have a naughty mind! That\'s why I love your stories so much! Wow, I love how you write Snape - I can\'t wait for more from you.
person Provocateur
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hypatia: I certainly did mean original characters ;). Bellatrix and Narcissa would be rather boring. Kinky, yes - but boring nonetheless (unintentional rhyme).
person Maela
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow...poor Severus. And poor Sabrina. :( I can totally see something like that pushing him into Voldemorts ranks though.