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November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It\'s a shame that the writing is really bad...... but I couldn\'t expect it otherwise....
Since it\'s written by more than one person it would probably be bad...
Since it\'s written by more than one person it would probably be bad...
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November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was incredibly bad. Crappy. Shitty, in fact. One of the crappiest stories I\'ve ever read on AFF, and, considering the amount of terrible stories on here, that\'s saying something. Feel proud.
Wait. Actually, don\'t feel proud. I wouldn\'t say having a bad story is something to be proud of. More like ashamed..
Wait. Actually, don\'t feel proud. I wouldn\'t say having a bad story is something to be proud of. More like ashamed..
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November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I agree with your first reviewer: it\'s pretty bad. Writing is not your forte, and English is obviously not your native language.
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November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yuckie.........
Can\'t wait to hear who Harry Chooses!!!
Can\'t wait to hear who Harry Chooses!!!
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November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
who will it be? the suspense is killing me!
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November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Don\'t quit your day job. Disjointed, incoherant and rambling.