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for Sage of time

by Darkangel7

person c'est moi
schedule August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This is actually a nice original idea for an mpreg! An idea which has a good, probable explanation behind it. The magical world can transfigure a human into an animal, polyjuice people, and grow new bones. So, why not the potion you described? Plus, it didn't involve either of them having to be actually pregnant. (A plus for the easily squicked.) I'd really like to read more if you are up to writing some more. (And a dash of Sirius/Remus would be nice too, if possible. But I'm happy with what you did include.)
person Mutaku
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hei! I have the feeling that this fic will be cool! Please don't dissapoint me and update soon, kay!