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November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked the pace of the first chapter. It seemed to involve all of the characters central to the plot, and the way that Hermione was tricked into touching the portkey was smart.
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November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I wasn\'t sure how this fic would be from reading the summary, it sounded a little like it would have a used plot. But you write very well and you really draw the reader into your story. I think that it will turn out to be wonderful, and i can not wait for more!