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Oh no, i think i wrote what i meant wrong. I mean that your SUMMARY made your story seemed like it had a used plot, but after reading your story i realized that it wasn\'t. I like this chapter, very well written. Your characterizations are thought out and well done. Cant wait for more

I liked that you had her figure out that it was Draco after he called her \'mudblood\'. Having her figure it out right away just doesn\'t seem realistic.

this is awesome!! and you left me w/ a damn cliffhanger. ah well, ill patiently await an update! lovin it, keep it up!

Great fic so far. But I do have to agree with a previous reviewer... this plot has been used! I sincerly hope that you make this an original fic. Please keep up and update soon! I love the Draco and Hermione pairing.

Wow! Great story! I love it so far!

Hi again,

I was really happy to see another update so soon after your first post. I\'m really enjoying the story so far, and chapter 2 did not disappoint! I think your story is in good taste, and you write very well. My only advice is that you take more time to delve into the characters\' thoughts, and do not rush the dialogue while portraying the situations. I personally love dialogue between characters, and I think you could add a lot to your story this way. I\'m looking forward to reading chapter 3, and can\'t wait to see the interaction between Draco and Hermione. BTW - I\'m glad you made Hermione try to resist the curse - it shows a lot about the strength of her character.

awesome i cant wait for the next. woo hoo.

a very good story so far. the character portrayals are believeable and close to canon. I like the way you have delevoped the storyline, with interesting snapshots of the main characters\' perspectives. i hope you get a chance to update soon, I\'m going to enjoy reading the rest of the story!

I like it so far. Keep it up and I\'ll keep reading it! thanks, geo

Good first chapter, defnitely. Although I wouldn\'t expect Ron\'s parents to not let him go. Sure, they\'d need much convincing, but I\'d expect them to let him go, being as Harry is his best friend and all. But I\'m not complaining. It\'s your story, after all, you have your reasons.

This is definitely one of the few stories I\'d stick around and wait for. Intriguing, yes.

I\'d love for you to keep it that way. I\'ll be holding my breath until your next update.