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for Discovering the Hidden Heart

by belladonnacordial

person DawnEB
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Much as I've enjoyed and looked forward to each installment of your story, I was wondering if it was going to head anywhere. Now you give us this parasite, and the story has moved forward considerably. Well done, and UPDATE!!!! (sorry, but I've just got to have more :) )
person niami
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you are a wonderful writer keep the great work flowing
person Hypatia
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch.9 is the best so far...and just when I thought you couldn't breech the impossibly high standard set in the first two chapters. What a hellacious hoot!!! I'm starting to think that this would make a great musical........
person m
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well written with interesting psychological analyses & original plot turns.
(Holds cup up "Some More Please")
person satyr
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So far so good. It's realisitc and good charaterisation. The skock syndrome symptoms are dead on as well to the aversion tendancies. Seems like poor Hermione is suffering from PTSD, but it's not extravagant or overdone. Very nice.
person S.J. More
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story and wish for you to please continue it!
-S.J.
person runner
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hurry up and write some more! I am in agony waiting for what happens next!
person Sea
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just discovered this fantastic story today. So well written, looking forward to more. Well done!
person tak
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay, so fantastic -just read all your chapters at once and now i want more.
very beautifully written, looks like i've just found a new favorite author...
person cupotrevor
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow..just found your story....i love your snape..and your story..update soon!!!!