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for Discovering the Hidden Heart

by belladonnacordial

person Anon
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This is good.
The parasite thing kind of threw me for a loop and I was feeling rather put out by it at first, but it doesn't feel so "out from left field" by the end of the chapter as it did at the beginning.
Do update soon and often. This is a wonderful combination of wit and humor and is just sweet enough to be just about perfect.
person Edania
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thankyou! for the update. I have to say i really am liking this twist to the story. Hmm i wait to see what happens now. I have to say you really got me hooked.
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Warning: If you read this story you are in grave danger of being pulled in and not come up until it is finished.

So there you have it... You have to finish it soon! Just think of all the poor souls that are held by this fic and cannot get out! Oh, dear God, what ever will we do? ;)
person Obsidian_Hair
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story, though at the beginning of this chapter I got a bit list in the dialogue... I had to reread it, to get it. But it makes sense now! Like, nice and different. BadHermione always refreshing *grin*. Keep it up and merry christmas if you're not going to update before then!!!
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting chapter. I hope Hermione and Severus can find something to help and get rid of that thing inside Hermione. Please update again and soon! I can't wait to read the next chapter!

Tiffany
person bookwyrm
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"Temper tantrums were one of the first social tactics I ever learned and are still surprisingly effective. " How utterly Snape! And now I shall ponder various methods of treatment that Minerva would NOT approve of. They start out pornographic and go on from there. Smirk.
person Eliza
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm laughing and crying both as I write this, partial for the interaction between Snape and Hermione, and partially because I feel rather sorry that she's lost all of her friends...

Good story, I'll keep tabs on it for sure.
person lovethelab
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The little fight at the end was just too funny! I had to laugh out loud! Well, more of a chorlte, but you get the idea. Great chapter BTW I am really enjoying this story. I was glad to see you had updated and now all I want is more!
person firewall
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 9 - What a fascinating chapter. I am totally captivated by it. You know it reminds me of a movie I saw wen I was much younger called the Tingler or something like that. It was one of those Late Night Fright movies that I loved. I can't wait to see where you are going with this.
person Jasmine
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love the twist in this last instalment. I though it was just a psych problem. The path they take to get this thing out of her promises to be interesting.

Keep up the good work.

Thanks for writing this

Jasmine