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for Discovering the Hidden Heart

by belladonnacordial

person killisandra
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i'm always in danger...hehe. So a parasite, huh? That's pretty cool. What is hermione going to do now? Anyway, just wanted to say that this story is coming along well. Will leave more reviews when you update. Thanks for writing and churning out the chapters so quickly.
Blessed Be,
Sandra
person tak
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aye, he's sweet but still a bastard. nice mix.
merry christmas.
person Sea
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Happy Holidays to you as well! The update was a marvelous present - thank you!
person Angie30
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL that was great! Go Hermione! Happy Holidays to you!
person cara
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I adore you. more please.
person tak
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yeah i know, i know, being picky.

It is your Kneazle's good *fortunate* that I settle for menacing anti-hero.

love the chapter, can't wait for more.
person Pianita
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! i really love this story, i can't put it down. I find Snape and Hermione's conversations absolutely brilliant. I hope you are planning to continue the story soon because i am in suspense over the out come!!!
person Lemon Head
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Big red lamprey? You know how to oog a girl out! I had nightmares about the strawberry. This seemed sudden. I went back and reread the whole thing. Either you were dropping hints all along or worked this in masterfully. Great story. Sexual healing?
person angel
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
poor mione .. i hope they can find a cure for her .. please please update soon and later for now

angel
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic. Your characterization is wonderful. Interesting idea with the parasite in Hermione. I'm very curious as to where you'll take it. Update soon please!